Short story : The First

A short story I've written, though I now I suppose I have to come up with a title, but  this one will do for now. Please leave your comments here.


The First by Zoe Wallace

 

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  • 11/4/2007 6:59 PM Wildermane wrote:
    Zoe, this is a marvelous short story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, your use of character development was spot on in my eyes. I could invision most of the story within my mind's eye.

    Very well done!

    ~Wildermane
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